Just a quick reminder: my first contest for cover art flats closes tonight at 11:59 p.m. If you've not entered your name yet, please scroll down and leave a comment on the Cover Art entry.
I've finally got the novella/short story piece for the upcoming anthology plotted out. I had a rough outline for it, but I still wasn't excited about it. I had an old idea that I liked better and it was sucking all my enthusiasm out of the current project. However, while I was taking my lunch break today, I had a mental break through! Yes, I now know the plot for the short story and I LOVE IT! I can't wait to jump and get this thing written.
There are still some holes in the plot that will get worked out as I get through the story. There's a number of characters that I haven't met yet and one character that I met in Nightwalker that I now get to spend some more time with. So, tonight is a short and sweet entry. I am hoping to pound out a couple thousand words before collapsing in bed tonight.
However, I don't want my loyal readers to feel neglected. I have a video for you. A friend of mine sent this over today. Growing up, one of my favorite cartoons was Tiny Toons and the best from that series were the Baby Plucky cartoons. I have pasted below one of my favorites. It doesn't make me laugh until I cry any longer, but I still chuckle at it. Good times.
- Location:home
- Mood:
excited - Music:I Remember -- Stabbing Westward
I’ve just got a couple random updates today. Book 2 has been handed in to my editor and I’ve started working on the anthology short story that I’ve got due in a couple of months. Yes, I am actually updating the word counter again (on Blogger). It’s slow going at the moment, but I am always slow to get into a book or story.
As you also may have noticed, I HAVE A WIDGET! Whoo-hoo! HarperCollins rocks! They created a widget for me and it’s positively lovely. So, now we all know how long we have until Nightwalker is finally released. Feel free to add it to your own site if you want. The release is still a long time away, but it’s quickly getting closer. (To see the widget, you will have to go to my Blogger account. I tried to post it over here, but I can't get LiveJournal to accept the coding.)
Finally, I have also located a new quiz. I know I haven’t posted one in a really long time. Below is my result. Be sure to check it out. It’s only 11 questions.
What type of Fae are you?
- Location:Parent's house
- Mood:
lazy
- Location:home
- Mood:
happy - Music:Sick & Beautiful -- Artificial Joy Club
It's back to the grind tomorrow. I gave myself one more night off and tonight was video game night. So, as a treat, I pulled out all my various copies Guitar Hero as well as my PlayStation 2, and played until my fingers screamed in pain ... then I played two more songs. Ahh... I love those games.
It's perfect for me. I have no musical talent. No rhythm, no timing. But with a little practice, I can rip through some of my absolute favorite songs like an expert. I haven't bought my copy of Rock Band yet simply because I have a short story and book 3 to writer before October. I can't afford the potential distraction.
If you've played either Rock Band or Guitar Hero, you get to name your own band and play through a career that takes you through different venues, from your friend's backyard to the ultimate outdoor summer concert festival. Naturally, the songs become more difficult as you go through the game.
The names of my bands have been:
Guitar Hero 1: Suicide Sleepover
Guitar Hero 2: The Cids
Guitar Hero 3: Sugar Monkeys
Guitar Hero- '80s Version: The Ravens
I do have two bands started over on Rock Band, but I can't think of both names. One is called Stinky Cheese.
If I could be in a band, I can't decide whether I would want to play the lead guitar or the drums. Maybe I could be a maverick like Foo Fighters Dave Grohl and do both. But not sing. I can't sing.
My bands sound would be an aggressive alternative rock, but still produce the occasional fun song. A Puddle of Mudd, Three Days Grace, Korn mix with some Nine Inch Nails anger thrown in for good measure.
So my question to you, dear readers and bloggers, is:
What would you name your band?
What would you play?
What would you sound like?
- Location:home
- Mood:
giddy - Music:The Four of Us Are Dying -- Nine Inch Nails
The contest for my cover flats has officially closed. I put all the names in a hat. (Actually, I couldn’t find a hat so I put the names in my colander. Heck, it’s not like I use it for cooking.) And the two names I pulled out are:
Starseeker and OrdinaryWhirled
Winners: please email me at JocelynnDOTDrakeATgmailDOTcom. (replace DOT and AT with the corresponding symbols) Tell me your real name and the address where I can ship the cover flat.
Thank you to everyone that entered and I've so glad you liked the cover. I was very pleased with the response. And don’t be downhearted if you didn’t win. I will be holding other contests as the release date (of July 29) approaches. I will be giving away at least two more cover flats and two of my ARCs.
In other news, Book 2 has been officially shipped off to my editor, who is looking forward to reading it. She also told me that Nightwalker is currently being featured as one of May’s First Look books. Very cool.
In the meantime, I am taking the night off. After working hard all weekend, I’ve earned a short break. Tomorrow or Wednesday, I jump back in and start working on the anthology short story.
- Location:home
- Mood:
content
- Location:home --editing again
- Mood:
content - Music:Somewhere Only We Know -- Keane
Isn't it lovely? This isn't the clearest copy. Here is another version that might be a little clearer.
- You're eligible if you're not related to me
- One entry per person
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- Please don't leave your email address in your comment. If you do, you will get spammed. (Not by me. I'm just saying that's a very real risk.)
- The giveaway closes at 11:59 pm eastern time on Sunday, May 4th. At that time, I will close the comment thread. A winner will be announced the following day.
- Location:home
- Mood:
excited
I recently received a reader question about how many manuscripts I wrote before I sold and how I got my agent. Last night, I discussed how many books I wrote and when I got started writing. Tonight, I am going to talk about finding my agent.
There are stories of writers who managed to snag an agent within a few weeks of sending out their first query letters. I’m not one of those writers. Actually, it took me roughly two years and a stack of rejection letters to win over my agent.
I tried the usual route of the Writer’s Digest Guide to Literary Agents. I searched the Internet and I had a few connections that were kind enough to recommend me to their agents. No luck. Of all my rejection letters, I will say that I had a very strong response overall. About 30% were just plain old rejection letters. No name, no signature. Another 10% were rejection letters with a handwritten note. Another 30% asked for the first 3 chapters. And another 30% not only asked for the first 3 chapters, but they went on to ask for the whole book.
The rejection letters were mounting and I will admit that I got discouraged. It’s hard not to. I was getting a lot of positive responses; the most popular being that I had a great voice. But for some reason no one could quite pin down, no one wanted me.
A good friend once told me that I wanted to find an agent who loved my book as much as I did. I understood what she was saying, but I can’t say that I necessarily believed her.
It had been 2 years of rejections. I was getting worried. Was urban fantasy getting too saturated?
I had just received an issue of the RWA magazine, which listed several agents that were looking to take on new clients. I copied down 5 names, all that I could contact via email. I drew a line in the sand. I needed a serious bite from someone in this group of 5 or I was going to pack away the manuscript and start on something new. If I was lucky, I thought I would be able to sell the new project and maybe be able to sell my urban fantasy at a later date when I was an established author.
From the group of 5, I got some very serious bites. Out of the 5, only 1 rejected me outright and 3 immediately asked for samples. One I don’t think I ever heard from. From the 3 that asked for samples, 2 asked to see the whole book.
However, one asked faster than the other. I couldn’t give her an exclusive look, because the book was actually with another agent and an editor who had yet to give me a final decision. I did promise not to send the book to anyone else. She asked to me hold off for only a week. I was willing to give her more time. That weekend was Mother’s Day. I didn’t expect her to read my book over Mother’s Day.
The following Monday, I was prepared to email her and tell her that I was willing to give her more time to review the book. Instead, she called me. She wanted to represent me. What really awed me was when she started talking about my characters. I could hear it in her voice. It was the same tone of love and excitement I used when I talked about them. And the clincher: she hadn’t finished reading the book yet. She still had about 100 pages left. She saw something in that book she couldn’t pass up. She saw something in my ability that she didn’t want to pass up. I was honored, flattered, and humbled in that moment.
My friend was right. I had found someone who loved my book as much as I did.
A couple days later I signed some paperwork making it all official. After a week of quick revisions, my agent had my book in the hands of several editors in all the big publishing houses. We got several serious nibbles.
My same friend warned me that it might take a while to land an offer.
We had an offer before Father’s Day.
So my advice… it’s not anything new. Stick with it. You’re going to get lots of rejections letters. Lots of rejections letters. No matter what I say, you’re going to take it personally. Just don’t let it stop you. If your writing is important to you, if you feel like this book MUST be shared with the world, then don’t let a few “no”s stop you. In the meantime, this process involves a lot of waiting. While you’re waiting, be working on that next project. You might not sell your first book first. Your third book might sell first and then you get back to your first one.
Jennifer Schober of Spencerhill Associates is my agent. She’s amazing. She believes in me. I’d be completely lost without her.
- Location:home
- Mood:
happy
A kind reader has provided me with today’s writing prompt:
“Maybe when you get the chance you could write a post about how you found your agent/how many manuscripts you wrote before you got picked up... Us pre-repped writers love to hear that stuff! :)”
Let’s see… I started writing stories when I was 12. I spent one entire summer seated on my bed with a battered notebook in my lap, re-writing the story of Robin Hood. Weeks prior, I had finished a great re-telling of the story by a wonderful author, but I was left feeling like something was missing. For me, the tale needed a strong female figure. So, I rewrote it. It came out to be about 50+ pages handwritten and I still have it buried somewhere under an enormous pile of unfinished manuscripts.
For the next couple years, I wrote stories about girls in high school, silly romance stories that will never ever see the light of day. Around my freshman or sophomore year in high school, a friend introduced me to fantasy fiction and I found my home. I have never gotten around to reading as much fantasy fiction as I would like. I was given Raymond Feist’s Midkemia series and I was in heaven. This was the kind of stuff I wanted to write. It sang to my creative heart in so many ways. Feist is an amazing storyteller and that is what I want to be.
So, in my freshman or sophomore year, I started my great fantasy series. I still have the map I designed of the world. I actually finished writing the first book and I’ve got the second book half done. But I’ve never finished it. Somewhere along the way, I decided that what I was saying wasn’t fresh or new enough. I needed a new angle to the fantasy genre, something different to say. So, the series has been put aside. However, it is one of my long-term goals to return to it one day. The idea, the heart of the story, is a good one. I think the world building and some of the main characters need to be completely revamped.
Over the years, the writing has never stopped. I hopped through genres with the same frequency that some people change their hair color. For me, it’s about following what the story demands and not worrying about what genre the story will fit in. I’ve written fantasy, science-fiction, horror, romance, historical romance, paranormal historical romance, dark fantasy, and action/adventure. And a few things that I haven’t found a description for just yet.
How many manuscripts did I write before I was picked up? I actually completed only a few books. Many stories were just practice, or an effort to get a story out of my head finally. And a part of me misses those days of just writing with no goal, no need to actually reach the ending.
Nightwalker is the first book I’ve ever tried to sell. I’ve written a lot of things that I love and have enjoyed, but Nightwalker was the first one that I felt like I needed to share with the world. I couldn’t keep Mira and Danaus to myself. They deserved better than that, I owed them that.
Okay, so I’ve rambled way too much already, so I will save the other half of the question for tomorrow night.
- Location:home
- Mood:
contemplative - Music:Indifference -- Pearl Jam
Hi-ho. Hi-ho. It’s off to work we go.
Yep, it’s time to get back to the whole writing thing. The conference was fun and the cold that I managed to catch is mostly gone. I’ve nearly caught up on the mountain of wash and I finally got around to cleaning the kitty litter box. (yes, the life of a writer really is this glamorous.) In other words, it’s time to stop procrastinating and get back to editing.
I did hear back from my agent and she enjoyed reading Book 2, which is a plus. I think I’m just struggling from the second-book blues. For me, it’s the idea of “sure, your editor liked your first book, but can you really do it again?” My agent seems to think so (god bless her vampire-lovin’ heart).
After completing the first round of edits, I discovered that there are several words and/or phrases that I now absolutely hate. Mostly because I use them way too much. I’m sure it happens to you. You’re locked in an intense scene, you’re plunging through, oblivious to the world around, just trying to get everything out as fast as possible. Then you look back and you realize that you used the word “still” four times in a single paragraph. Yuck.
So, here is my list of top 5 words/phrases that I used too much in Book 2:
- for the moment/at the moment
- still
- only
- just
- quickly
Most of these have been words have been stripped out, leaving me feeling quite annoyed. I am now going back through to make sure all the motivations are clear within the book and to weave in a few more details here and there. Then, it’s off to my editor next week.
In the meantime, I’ve got another video. Are you sick of these yet? Sorry, it’s not a kitty video. I’m out of the cool animated ones. However, this one is really old, but it’s one of my all-time favorites. I remembered it following this past week’s Earth Day. Enjoy.
- Location:home --editing again
- Mood:
cheerful
